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Diary in English♡On the 15th of Oct.  イギリスに来て一か月で使ったお金。

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Diary in EnglishOn the 15th of Oct. 

 

 

添削前

Today I woke up at 9 am. I got changed clothes and had breakfast. Then I opened the window, did the laundry and cleaned my room with a vacuum. I always feel pleasant when I clean my room. 
I cooked pasta and miso soup for lunch. After I had it, I went for walking. I looked for a birthday card for one of my friend, but I couldn't find a good one. I'll go another shops before long.

Then I dropped in a supermarket to buy food because I decided to cook lunch myself to save money. In last 30 days, I spent £280! I think it's terrible. I have been staying a host family's flat and they prepared breakfast and dinner almost everyday. Furthermore, I have been restraining myself from having extra snacks, desserts, drinks and alcohol! I have to save money because I am not working now. I am afraid of spending money without working.

 

添削後

Today I woke up at 9 am. I got dressed and had breakfast. Then I opened the window, did the laundry and vacuumed my room. It was a pleasant feeling to have a clean room and clean clothes.
I cooked pasta and miso soup for lunch. After I ate, I went for a walk. I looked for a birthday card for one of my friends, but I couldn't find a good one. I have to try other shops later.

 

Then I dropped into a supermarket to buy some food because I decided to cook lunch myself to save money. In last 30 days, I have spent £280! I think that's terrible. I have been staying with a host family and they have prepared breakfast and dinner almost everyday. Furthermore, I have been restraining myself from having extra snacks, desserts, drinks and alcohol! I have to save money because I am not working now. I am afraid of spending money without any money coming in.

 

Notes:

pleasant -- a person is pleasant means she is nice.  You can't say she FEELS pleasant.  Use pleasant for a thing or an action.  The park is a pleasant place to walk in the spring.  
It was a pleasant feeling to have a clean room and clean clothes.

Go for a walk or go walking (the first one is more common)

another is used with a singular count noun -- I'll try another shop later.  Other is used for more than one countable noun -- I have to try other shops.  Some other sounds better

In the last 30 days -- this requires present perfect since it is FROM 30 days ago UP TO NOW (so not completely past)

In the last week, I've seen three movies.
In the last two hours, I've sent ten emails.

I think it's terrible that I've spent so much money BUT I've spent so much money.  That's terrible! (That = the fact that I spent so much $)

 

Thank you for your corrections Rena Deutsch on italki :)

 

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丁寧に添削をつけてもらえたので、 お恥ずかしいですが久しぶりに添削前のものも公開しています。

余談ですが、先日あるクラスメイトが「私Writingがあかんわ…」と嘆いていたので、つたない英語で italki をお勧めしておきました

 

 

italkiについては過去にこちらの記事でまとめています!

何気に当ブログでアクセス数の多い記事です

hinauklog.hatenablog.com

 

 

さてさて。イギリスに来て30日経ったわけですが、私のお財布は大変なことになっています!!笑

 

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食べ物に280£!!!!恐ろしいです…

ちなみにエンターテイメントはミュージカルや映画、また学校のアクティビティに参加してかかったお金です。ショッピングは服代。パーソナルケアはシャンプーやファブリーズ等を買ったお金です。基本的にケチって歩いているのでバスはまだ一回しか乗ったことがありません。

 

 

 

というわけで……

 

 

 

こうなりました💦

 

明日からランチ節約頑張ります!

 

にしても、もう4週間経ったんだなぁと思うと本当にあっという間です💦少しは成長出来ていたらいいんだけれど💦

 

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